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    J.D
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    Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

    [center:2didfmn7]Welcome to my Thread!



    Newest Animation
    'Kickboard'



    Quite proud of this, particularly the silhouette effect used as the base runs in from the right, it's simple, but works very well in this particular scene. I'll be using it again in the future.

    This is an unfinished piece of work, and will be furthered on in the coming days.





    Credit goes to Jon & Picto.






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    Re: Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

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    Re: Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

    Its hard to evaluation you because you have one animation with a some frames with a stickman, but the start looks cool, the movment of the skate are good too, soo finish it and I will able to make a decent
    comment on it, and I really will do this xD
    Keep it up man

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    Re: Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

    Not too much to CC about here. But there is one thing you could improve: spacing.
    When the stickman jumps up, it spends too much time in the air ( or you could simply call it over-eased ). Try to have a feeling for it, and you'll be fine.
    Can't give you a rank now, because it's too short, but I'd say
    Med-Beginner.

    ~Sharp

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    Re: Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

    Thanks for the comments, guys. I'm just about to head out for the day so the next update will probably be finished and uploaded at some point tomorrow. I've taken the criticism on board and hopefully that'll be evident in the next update.

    -S.

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    Re: Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

    you moved a skateboard and rotated it a bit? wow well done

    not much to say except for the run at the end was pretty bad
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    Re: Strato-mations! (Updated 12/03/11)

    The movement of the skate is good. I especially like the 3D. Usually I'm very lazy about things like that. lol
    The animation is not complete, right?
    You can not get a sense of how to drive stick is by being very fast, but I think that was good.

    keep it up ^ ^
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