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  1. #1
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    Let's try this again!

    [center:22lm7zw6]I've been on these forums for three years, and of those three years I've only animated six months. During that time I reached, by popular opinion, borderline intermediate. Now I have just begun animating once again, after taking nearly a year-long hiatus from it.


    Name: Failed Back Flip
    Date: 06/12/2011

    Notes: 14 FPS, 26 frames, the physics are intentionally shit.

    Name: Retard Kick
    Date: 06/10/2011

    Notes: 16 FPS, 28 frames, Credits to GifGiff for the base.

    This is my first animation in nearly a year:
    Name: Rusty Swordplay
    Date: 06/10/2011

    Notes: 16 FPS, 19 frames.

    I appreciate ANY constructive criticism.[/center:22lm7zw6]
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    Re: Let's try this again!

    I see you kinda have the easing down, your animation shows some decent power. Only thing that annoys me is the poses, he has his back bend a lot, but further you did a pretty good job.

  3. #3
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    Re: Let's try this again!

    i quite like this, i dont think the back bone bends too much
    but the foot placement is off a bit so you could fix that
    high beginner

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    Re: Let's try this again!

    I have a new animation posted:


    Out of complete boredom I made this, complete with totally horribly kick reactions and slight leg shakiness!
    Whew!
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    Re: Let's try this again!

    Oooohh I remember you, well, welcome back and shake some rust. Try some basic moves, like a run and all that shit to try to get back on tracks ;D

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    Re: Let's try this again!

    Retard kick... is... well... a little bit retarded! That is to say, I don't feel the power of the kick at all. I mean, the effects are powerful, when it comes to the tremor and the guy being fully knocked over.. but there's no real build up to it.

    The spacing is smooth, I'll give you that. And there is some sense of flow, though a little stiffness is in there also. I'd say you're about boarder-line Intermediate. Just work on fixing the general rusty shit and you should be Inters in no time

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    Re: Let's try this again!

    So, after a spark of patience, I decided to create another short animation.
    Yes, the physics are intentionally shitty.



    Enjoy, rate, cc.
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