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    Razor's thread

    Hi All! Disclaimer: My English too bad. I'm from Russia.^^ But I learn the language.
    Pivot anims:
    Newest:

    Gymnastic 2
    Gymanstic1
    Try to copy Animation from Big Ass Tutorial
    NEW:
    Ice
    Tumble
    Small Fight
    OLD:
    Combo x2 and little 3d
    Random shit
    new version(2011)
    Old version. (2009)
    Combox4
    OLD SHIT:
    Something
    Kill Test
    Back flip
    Comments Please.

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    Re: Razor's thread

    Hmm, quite decent, but you need to work more on flowing and easing overall.
    Med-Beginner.

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    Re: Razor's thread

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    Med Beginner.
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    Re: Razor's thread

    Comment please!

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    Re: Razor's thread

    Update

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    Re: Razor's thread

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    Quote Originally Posted by Razor
    You're doing pretty fine, this one is better than your previous one.
    I have to admit you should try adding blood, as it would make it much better and add a little style to it.
    I don't like the way you stopped the right stickman in the air, it looks stop'n'go.
    The walk at the end is really funny/original, I like the way you kept it all flowing and smooth.
    Med-High Beginner, just work more on spacing, stiffness and flowing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sharp
    You're doing pretty fine, this one is better than your previous one.
    I have to admit you should try adding blood, as it would make it much better and add a little style to it.
    I don't like the way you stopped the right stickman in the air, it looks stop'n'go.
    The walk at the end is really funny/original, I like the way you kept it all flowing and smooth.
    Med-High Beginner, just work more on spacing, stiffness and flowing.
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    Thank you! I like your comments. You say really important things. And I want to see comment not only by ~Sharp.

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