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    Old Newbie Nanzor's Avatar
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    Updated 8/2- Nanzor's Animations - Dance!

    Hello, my name is Nanzor



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    Flips
    Yes i know when he jumps off the wall he freezes. Im too lazy to go back and fix it
    [spoiler:go1wehdf][/spoiler:go1wehdf]

    running
    [spoiler:go1wehdf][/spoiler:go1wehdf]

    walking
    [spoiler:go1wehdf][/spoiler:go1wehdf]

    Below this line is choppy and slow, dont rate
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    small fight loop
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    random
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    Running animation
    [spoiler:go1wehdf][/spoiler:go1wehdf][/center:go1wehdf]
    Please tell me whats wrong with it and give me ideas on what to make next! Thanks!

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    Junior Member .Vibrator's Avatar
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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    Dude, you can only create one thread, read the rules.
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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    I'm sorry i diddnt mean to post two idk what happend! But can you still critique my animation?

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    Junior Member .Vibrator's Avatar
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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    @Running animation
    meh.
    So, i can't much about the animation, but you need to make it faster.Cuz it seems kind good, some stiffnes here anda there, but it's ok.
    Low-beg for me.
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    [center:3cnc8ddm]Topic[/center:3cnc8ddm]
    [center:3cnc8ddm]Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    I have five fingers,
    The middle one's for you.
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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    Quote Originally Posted by .Vibrator
    meh.
    So, i can't much about the animation, but you need to make it faster.Cuz it seems kind good, some stiffnes here anda there, but it's ok.
    Low-beg for me.
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    Thanks! I tried making it faster in the new animation that is edited into the OP.

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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    hmmm, you have alot to learn.. your anims are really stiff and uneased, also they are really choppy, try using the onionskin to make them more good-looking with smoothness, move every joint/frame, make longer anims and watch your footplacement
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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    Good animations. im a noob so idk much but id say work on the easing

    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=86363<---need lots of help to improve

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    Re: Nanzor's Animations

    Updated with smoother running and a walking loop!!

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    Re: Updated 8/1- Nanzor's Animations

    The walking one was good, although the arms were a bit stiff.
    As for the running, fair, but both stiff and shaky.
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    Re: Updated 8/1- Nanzor's Animations

    Hey man that is pretty good. The legs are VERY smooth which I was actualy surprized by since this is a loop. I think where you could improve is by straightening his back as steps forward so you get a sense of momentum or flow instead of just a basic movement.
    You could also make the arms a little more loose so they don't look stiff and uncomfortable.
    Great job with the legs though, I'm impressed.


 
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