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    Fresh Newbie MrGogeta65's Avatar
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    New here,Rank my Animation

    Tell me where to improve

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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Woah nice.
    That has some amazing movements, the punches were great except he was very stiff If you moved his back a bit more it would look alot not stiff. lol
    Its better if you upload your gif in http://yourimg.in
    Your rank would be med-beginner.
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    Fresh Newbie MrGogeta65's Avatar
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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Tell me where i can improve.

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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Your anim is smooth and cool but a little stiff,
    Med beg

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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Hmm, you has great potential!! but i feel like your not using the full extent of your talent, i want to see a little longer animation where your figure uses a bit more of the frame room. Also Try and move every joint in every frame, even just a little, especially on those back joints those are very stiff in your animations. Overall good job Med Beg.

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    Fresh Newbie MrGogeta65's Avatar
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    Getting better,I want to be high beg.Got a long way to go.

    Here is something new.

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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Dude you need to work more on the basics [stiffness, easing, spacing and all]
    For now your main problem is stiffness and foot placement. Just try to move every joint whenever you make new frame. About foot placement I think that it is the easiest basic that is learned by animators. Just don't let the feet slide. I suggest you read some tutorials about basic movement so you could get the idea of the whole process.
    For now med-beginner but you could get very good very fast.
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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Your spacing needs to be more dynamic. The movements all move at about the same speed with little easing throughout most of the animations you have posted.

    Also, I suggest using http://yourimg.in to upload your animations rather than posting gif files as attachments

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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    pretty good actually id say medium beginner work on stiffness and foot placement



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    Fresh Newbie MrGogeta65's Avatar
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    Re: New here,Rank my Animation

    Ok,Update Time..I'm Back!!

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