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    Check out my thread guys, I need comments...

    [center:wqgmz4ye]Something About Me[/center:wqgmz4ye]
    Hey guys, I'm Logoped. I've been animating for a while so I decided to finally show some anis. I'll be putting my animations here so please rate them!

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    [default kill]
    Kill that default!

    [sword play#2]
    Bring out the blades and exercise more.

    [combo]
    C-c-c-combo breaker.

    [inter attempt]
    This is going to be it!

    [grim reaper]
    The Grim Reaper, comes to take your soul

    [ballz]
    Look at that pathetic stick, fighting with ballz

    [swordplay]
    -Sword? Two please :P

    [dark bert joint]
    A phailed Dark Bert joint.

    [preview]
    A preview of my incomming inter attempt...

    [sword combo]
    Made in aproximately 30 minutes it was the one ani that I enjoyed animating from the beggining to the end, with no doubts and misstoughts

    [inter attempt]
    Failed inter attempt! I liked it very much sadly you didn't...

    [movements test]
    {flash version here}
    Some movements test, I made a flash version of the animation because I enjoyed making the animation.

    [wobly test]
    Wobly test with no-bones-stick. It's kinda pointless and unentertaining to watch, as any other test.

    [sword masta]
    {wont be finished}
    Sword masta! Here I made a test of moves that I used in other animations.

    [combo practice]
    Combo practice animation, Pivot failed so I had to leave it like that.

    [training combo]
    The first animation that I made in a while. Hope you enjoy it!
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    Re: Hey its me!

    Jesus...how do you save your .gifs like that? :/
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    Re: Hey its me!

    Well I dunno, they just save like that, but please could you rate me. I want to know how good am I and which basics I need to cover to get better...
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    Re: Hey its me!

    OK ok.... this one failed so I decided to leave it like that, again Sorry for double post but I need coments...
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    Edit: the zombie at the end is kinda begging... so don't say it's shaking like a leaf
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    Re: NEED COMMENTS....

    You actually got some really nice ideas, it's just learning how to apply them that pulls you down slightly.
    The poses on your newest animation are really great, only some small foot placement issues and stiffness I can see.
    The movements themselves aren't bad at all, I'm quite surprised in fact.
    But there's one point where the sword seems to go 3D without the arms following it. Check the last frames and you'll see what I'm talking about, the sword's 3D simply doesn't match the arms' movement.
    I also don't like the zombie/green stickman's reaction on the part where he's laying down. The head is shaky and so is the front arm.
    Those are some issues with a medium difficulty to solve, so watch out. Although I can almost guarantee that you'll have no trouble following my advice and solving those petty issues.
    Currently Med-High Beginner, but more like Med-Beginner. Make a smoother, more fluid animation and you'll get there.

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    Re: NEED COMMENTS....

    Yeah thanks for CC man :P Altough in the end while the zombie was shaking I meant to make it kinda beg, apparently you didn't understand that
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    Re: NEED COMMENTS....

    Quote Originally Posted by Logoped
    Yeah thanks for CC man :P Altough in the end while the zombie was shaking I meant to make it kinda beg, apparently you didn't understand that
    Even so it looks too shaky. If I were you, I'd add more frames inbetween or at least smaller movements.

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    Re: NEED COMMENTS....


    [wobly test]

    I'll leave it like that, doubt ill finish it...
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    Re: NEED COMMENTS....

    I think you should finish the animation. Maybe make the screen wider and and add a couple more frames to finish the effects. His head also jerks up a bit when he does the second kick but it's not that bad.
    Im really loving the "sword masta"! I thought the begging/shaky head was really well done. You could definately tell that he didn't want to die. I liked the sword slash effect, but you should've added one more frame of 3d before the last slash effect. The use of the tremor was good, you should of added it on the last swing.
    Overall it was very good. About med-high beg. With some minor improvements you would become high beg. I look forward to seeing more from you

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    Re: NEED COMMENTS....

    You seem to have got the basic down a little. Some parts can be a bit stiff, and even choppy at times, to the point where your animations seem med-beginner-ish. Just work on your flow and your easing and you'll be intermediate in no time, but for now: High beginner.

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