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  1. #1
    Old Newbie fishypoo's Avatar
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    I could ask you the same question!
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    Help me improve!!

    Can everyone just tell the stuff that you liked and disliked plz? also tell me the stuff that i could change.




    THNX

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    Re: Help me improve!!

    I think you could maybe work on your easing a bit because it's a bit off, but I did like that rock pull out of the ground also maybe turn up the franerate but besides that, you are on the right track!


 

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