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  1. #1
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    Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    Hello everyone!

    This is my animations:

    DB short:


    http://yourimg.in/j/jvek6r.gif

    Another DB short:



    http://yourimg.in/j/m8uq0w.gif

    Fight.. Um, ya short xF:



    http://yourimg.in/m/2jx62d0.gif

    Flow [No center] Run:



    http://yourimg.in/m/346zpq9.gif

    Another short! (Yes, i know, beam suck):



    http://yourimg.in/m/34awz14.gif

    Movement test:



    http://yourimg.in/m/c2w86e9.gif


    Okaay, yup, i know shorts |:, making long animations is hard...

    Rate, comment..

  2. #2
    Regular Member theiman's Avatar
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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    These animations are pretty good but to short, sorry can't give you a grade for that :l
    Courtesy
    EDIT: Wait no Actually I would give you a med beginner, Movements awesome but no particles on transformation
    viewtopic.php?f=2&t=87388

  3. #3
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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    Another boring short :P

    Run test:



    http://yourimg.in/m/fxhyl75.gif

    Rate, comment..

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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    Really nice, some bobbing on the head would've been perfect.
    Med-Beginner. Really smooth and flowy.

  5. #5
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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    *DANGER* This run suck D:.



    http://yourimg.in/m/235jjie.gif

    Next animation will be loonger!...

  6. #6
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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    ur easing is good just in the wrong place and time consider the momentum and you will be good

    low~med beginner

  7. #7
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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    Hm... Failed run, U making too small steps.

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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    Quote Originally Posted by ZielonuLimu
    *DANGER* This run suck D:.



    http://yourimg.in/m/235jjie.gif

    Next animation will be loonger!...

    Try to see Crono's running style tutorial, or study some running animations

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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    I think you should work on footplacement, maybe a little easing, and flow. right now i have to say that youre med beginner maybe you should check out Darren's tutorial if you havent already just keep practicing

    Darren's Tutorial: viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662
    Wanna give Courtesy? Please?
    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=88272
    [only 2 anims]

  10. #10
    Junior Member glym's Avatar
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    Re: Green[Zielony]Limu here!.

    OK, your animations are actually pretty good. They are eased, smooth, spaced well, etc. The effects are good except for in the beam test. Your first DB short: Goku's leg jitters a little. Often people don't pay attention to the limbs they aren't using, but it improves the naturality (is that a word?) of the animations. Medium High Beginner. Keep it up.

    Courtesy?
    [url=http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=84950]


 

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