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    Rank Me

    Pls rank me and tell me what to do to make my animations better.
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    Re: Rank Me

    Quote Originally Posted by TheBlackNote
    Pls rank me and tell me what to do to make my animations better.
    Ty


    [spoiler:3njiyfv2][/spoiler:3njiyfv2]
    I liked the start to your animation with the kick but nothing else. the movements are very stiff (which doesn't exactly bother me) the ground kept bouncing a lot which sickens me and I didn't understand what happened with the beam, it blasts the enemy and another beam comes out. Use realism in your pivots by making the guy disappear after getting hit and stop making the ground shake so much
    EDIT: also make your moves less stiff

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    Re: Rank Me

    Quote Originally Posted by theiman
    Quote Originally Posted by TheBlackNote
    Pls rank me and tell me what to do to make my animations better.
    Ty


    [spoiler:2gitf93s][/spoiler:2gitf93s]
    I liked the start to your animation with the kick but nothing else. the movements are very stiff (which doesn't exactly bother me) the ground kept bouncing a lot which sickens me and I didn't understand what happened with the beam, it blasts the enemy and another beam comes out. Use realism in your pivots by making the guy disappear after getting hit and stop making the ground shake so much
    EDIT: also make your moves less stiff
    thanks for reply ill take that in mind when im makin new animation.

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    Re: Rank Me

    You had a nice little combo but you used the tremble effect too much. I also agree about the beam thing. Why do two come out? You seem to have a good sense with the effects which was nice. Also work on your stiffness,shakyness and easing. Keep at it though.

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    Re: Rank Me

    That replay has stile.I liked the way he eradicated everything with that beam.
    My Animations Courtesy?

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    Re: Rank Me

    Whoa, great animation, nice to see you're trying out some advanced effects. That combo looked good, but the noticeable shakiness ruined it a bit. It is mainly in the stickfigures upperbody during that combo, the limbs are going all over the place and the spacing looks really awkward to me. It could be from the tremor effect you added, maybe you should tone it down a bit and just try to focus on spacing out those sticks without the tremor and see how you go.

    Apart from that the rest looked really good. Keep practicing buddy

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    thanks all very much.


 

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