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    Oliver's Thread: New Layout and a new animation



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    Beginner - December 7, 2011
    (Became a Beginner, and slowly progressed into a better animator).

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    Current Rank: Intermediate

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    Wow! I have finally reached the title and rank of Intermediate. My position here is a bit unstable, but I will prove to all of you that I do deserve this. Anyway, please enjoy my animations. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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    Ichigo Kurosaki Sword Thing (Newish) | Pivot File (Download)

    Grimmjow Jeagerjaques Run Thing (Very Old) | Pivot File (Download)
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    Tarantula (Unfinished and Old) | Pivot File (Download)
    (This was a failed joint, and I only did my part on this. The movements suck, but I like it).

    Default Punches (Old) | Pivot File (Download)
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    Re: My Thread

    Definately med beginner. I would think your high beg.
    It's very smooth and the movements are unique. The effects are amazing aswell.
    Overall rank: high beginner
    Please show more animations soon.

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    Re: My Thread

    Really? Thanks.
    Any CC? ( Not much in it I know ,but try your best I want to get better. )

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    You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.

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    Re: My Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Lion
    You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.
    Ah thank you very much I'm working on something with Doddsy's Base at the moment.

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    Re: My Thread

    -Update second one on top.

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    Re: My Thread

    You really need to work on your poses. When you're animating try to imagine the stickfigure was doing it in real life. A lot of your stickfigures would have broken limbs if they did stuff like that. O.o
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    Re: My Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Styk
    You really need to work on your poses. When you're animating try to imagine the stickfigure was doing it in real life. A lot of your stickfigures would have broken limbs if they did stuff like that. O.o
    Nah I would but I'm to lazy at the moment thanks for the CC.
    Any thoughts on the movements and not the limbs?

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    Re: My Thread

    Your animations are smooth and flowy but they lack power and poses are very odd. Just play with spacing until it looks nice and make the pose of the stickman natural.

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    Re: My Thread

    Ah, thank you.


 
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