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    Dedicated Member TheRavenHouse's Avatar

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    The Raven House: The Execution

    [center:3oerb11y]Execution

    Please tell me how to improve, I will return all courtesy.[/center:3oerb11y]

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    Re: The Raven House Makes Animations That Suck

    I'm not sure why you don't have any comments yet, you deserve them.
    Your animation, although having quite brilliant ideas, are incredibly stiff and I would recommend working on more basic punching and running and kicking before moving on to the complex things your doing now.
    The main problems, in case you want to look for tutorials, are:
    -Easing
    -Smoothness
    -Stiffness
    You are about low-med beginners right now, but, get good enough with the basics, and you'll soon be high beginner. Good luck in getting better- and some more comments. You deserve it.

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    Re: The Raven House Makes Animations That Suck

    Your animation looks very shaky, try to hold the footplacement.
    Also try to animate every joint in each frame

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    Re: The Raven's house of animation.

    Update, new animation.

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    Re: The Raven's house of animation.

    Work on your foot placement and you seem stiff.

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    Re: .SpaceD. My first good movements.

    Updated with the thing, and the stuff,

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    Re: .SpaceD. My first good movements.

    kay.

    first, I saw that your moves are quite good eased and spaced, but like quasi and Olive said, try to hold the footplacement every time

    what I really like is the easing of the boxes

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    Re: .SpaceD. My first good movements.

    Nice thing and good animations but has very stop and go an you should work on foot replacement and flow movements

    Courtz ?

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    Re: The Raven House: The Execution

    Bump, New animation

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    Re: The Raven House: The Execution

    Quote Originally Posted by Olive oil
    Work on your foot placement and you seem stiff.


    Toulouse: Don't make pointless posts like this.


 

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