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    Rank me please!

    This is my M16A4 Reload its quite smooth in my opionion but i need a rank or tip!
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    Re: Rank me please!

    You should animate every joint in every frame.
    You only animated the arm in the main part of your anim.

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    Re: Rank me please!

    True from now on no more all nighters and pesi

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    Re: Rank me please!

    That Is (in my opinion) a med beginner, not high because when the les bend they stop too suddenly, add a bit of easing to the movment of the rest of the body except arms and the gun. With that small imprvement, you'd be a high beg (in my opinion).

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    You are... Med Beginner IMO.

    You can use sticks, that is cool. But you have to ease. And the animation is also super stiff. You don't move only your arm without moving some parts of your body too, right? Also, try to keep feet in their place.

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    the sticks are cool, everything is set and awesome-looking, the only problem is that its too stiff try moving the whole stick it will look more realistic

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    Re: Rank me please!

    Not smooth enough. Stretch it out a bit more.
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    Re: Rank me please!

    awesome stick! work more on easing man! and as I notice when he picked up the reload in his waist, it kinda floated up to his hands. reach it out! cool but low beginner.

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    Re: Rank me please!

    Thank you guys for all your help and tips im currently Remaking it to ease it a bit i also did a zombie walk test with tips but for some reason its like 4 frames slow any tips on making it faster?


 

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