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  1. #1
    Newbie TheSacredLegend's Avatar
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    Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    .o.

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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    dont easy so much,work on stiffnesss and dat will be fine
    Low-beginner for now keep practicing man

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    Fresh Newbie MrFreshWafflez's Avatar
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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    Hey! , I have a little Costructive Critisizm for you

    BTW YOUR REALLY STIFF!!!!

    I like your animation but,

    Easeing and, Arms-

    .You could ease more, your animation was really choppy - With love
    .You need to practice useing your arms more, The arms were really choppy and, twitchy. Like a cat after you run it over LOL (NOt trying to be mean) ... (it was a joke)
    . btw, they were also sort of out of place when you made the animation; however when you finish go through all the frames and, make sure every thing looks correct and, not out of place.

    Foot Placement-

    .Your foot placement was a little off. you should add feet to your bae to guide you. Maybe even a ground that is the lightest of grey to line up your feet so people can't see it.

    Movement, air, or what ever its called LOL, and background.

    .The ground was really choppy you should ease it more.
    . WHen the base moves his arm but, i couldnt help but, notice that he had a swift behind his arm to make it more realistic NICE.

    I hope I helped- YOUR WELCOME
    [center:2ba4mut2]Thread[/center:2ba4mut2]
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    Dedicated Member Ado dragon's Avatar
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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    Not bad but slow.

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    Liberty Phish DaniŽl's Avatar

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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    Alright, here are a few easy steps to make that animation look a lot more appealing.
    1. Move every limb, every singe frame. This might look hard in the beginning, but you'll get used to it.
    2. Try to keep the foot (or in this case the part where the leg ends) of the leg that isn't lifted in the exact same place.
    3. When you save the animation as a GIF, save it under these settings:
    [tn=250:23owjo5a]http://i.imgur.com/o1zMm.png[/tn:23owjo5a]
    Good luck.

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    Fanatic Enthusiast Oliver's Avatar

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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    Quote Originally Posted by MrFreshWafflez
    Hey! , I have a little Costructive Critisizm for you

    [s:2qc73ym9]BTW YOUR REALLY STIFF!!!![/s:2qc73ym9]

    I like your animation but,

    Easeing and, Arms-

    .You could ease more, your animation was really choppy - With love
    .You need to practice useing your arms more, The arms were really choppy and, twitchy. [s:2qc73ym9]Like a cat after you run it over LOL (NOt trying to be mean) ... (it was a joke)[/s:2qc73ym9]
    . btw, they were also sort of out of place when you made the animation; however when you finish go through all the frames and, make sure every thing looks correct and, not out of place.

    Foot Placement-

    .Your foot placement was a little off. you should add feet to your bae to guide you. Maybe even a ground that is the lightest of grey to line up your feet so people can't see it.

    Movement, air, [s:2qc73ym9]or what ever its called LOL,[/s:2qc73ym9] and background.

    [s:2qc73ym9].The ground was really choppy you should ease it more. [/s:2qc73ym9]
    . WHen the base moves his arm but, i couldnt help but, notice that he had a swift behind his arm to make it more realistic NICE.

    I hope I helped- YOUR WELCOME
    Get a load of this guy.

    He's right on some parts, but ignore his useless comments through his criticism. He pretty much covered everything I was going to say about your animation. Ignore the part about the ground being choppy just focus on your movements for now.

    Anyway, great job man I love it. I'll be sure to comment again once you update. (:
    If I miss your update PM me, and I'll comment on your thread.

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    Fresh Newbie NYANPlVOT's Avatar
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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    Pretty good, except it seems to me like you either saved it with bad settings, or tried to hard to ease. I like the swift thing on one of the last punches, it added that smooth effect there. But uhh. As the others were saying, work on foot placement and stiffness/choppyness. Still, not bad
    Cortesy? Check out mah thread.

    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=89769

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    Newbie TheSacredLegend's Avatar
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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    Thanks for the advice ppl. ill keep those in mind.
    .o.

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    Re: Uuhh.. RANK ME??

    UPDATE.
    .o.


 

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