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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Hey man, those are some nice animations you got in your thread, I really like the smooth movements, you seem to have a good feel for flow. At this point, I would try out some more advanced movements, like flips, handstands, cartwheels, whatever, and if you want to get creative, maybe you should try to add some more elaborated backgrounds, because, let's face it, Naruto animations aren't something new.
    Anyways, keep it up, you have great potential man.

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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Thanks man , flips are not really my strong point but if you say so . Are there any more ?

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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Damn. Best animation I've seen in a while at the Beginner Section.

    Can't say nothing since my criticism is just the worst sorry. ):
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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Update naruto preview , comments ?

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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Nice stuff ariel ace ! I pretty much agree with everything Lympha said: the animations are smoothed and well done, but you should try more detailed background. Also, another thing I would suggest: try nicer explosion effects! Do not hesitate to exaggerate the explosion. Make the environment get damaged and use light effects to show the boom brightening the scenario as well the characters

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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    wow man great stuff here. No idea why you are not in inters


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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Thank you and UPDATE!

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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Looks like in your latest one, you just need to smooth out your movements more. Have him ease into the run more, and also put more frames into the actual run so it looks smoother. You need to do this to the jump too. Aside from that, just work on making your poses look more natural.

    Keep at it

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    Re: Ariel ace thread

    Wow, thank you ! I really appreciate the help !


 
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