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  1. #1
    Zio
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    animations that is pretty noobish..

    my latest anim on top:
    punch-headbutt counter attack

    Run Loop
    http://i.imgur.com/WYp2J.gif
    Joint part 1
    http://i.imgur.com/yOlOf.gif
    low beg footplacement error anim
    http://i.imgur.com/slIne.gif
    sword slash
    http://i.imgur.com/DnTJi.gif
    my most realistic anim
    http://i.imgur.com/DC6Fm.gif
    background practice (wait for it to replay for best quality)
    http://www.imgnook.com/G2TDBo.gif
    dual pistol gunshot
    http://i.imgur.com/sIwS8.gif
    punch!
    http://i.imgur.com/HiSFa.gif
    gunshot 2!
    http://i.imgur.com/3f4xp.gif

    Well,im not new to pivot you know

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    Liberty Phish DaniŽl's Avatar

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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    Bend the back a bit more, let the back arm stretch a bit and the front oen bend a bit. Try to fully extend the front leg when it hits the floor.
    Practice, practice, practice, mate.

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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    Lympha your totally wrong...
    he needs to look at tutorials on easing foot placement flow all that stuff

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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    Quote Originally Posted by moderndwalfare
    Lympha your totally wrong...
    he needs to look at tutorials on easing foot placement flow all that stuff
    No you are. Think before you post man.
    Although some tutorials help, but criticism and practice are better in my opinion.


    Anyway, it looks really stiff man try to add a bit more flow to it. Then again I'm no expert at criticism. Nice job though I have my eye on this thread.

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    Zio
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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    yay!thanks for the positive replies !

    Quote Originally Posted by Zio
    wheres oblivionfall?I SOOO WANT HIM TO RANK ME ON MY THREAD :3

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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    Ok, your animations need some more easing and as olive said, try to give your animations some more flow, this will give your animations a more professional look.
    Also, a tip for when your doing running, try to move the origin (little orange dot) up and down to make it look more realistic.
    I think your low beginner.
    Just keep practicing and you will get better

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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    Some movements look unrealistic. For example, the first jump on http://www.imgnook.com/G2TDBo.gif
    On http://i.imgur.com/DnTJi.gif , the effect of the sword do not look very good, but I liked the idead of the stickman being sliced that way I suggest you to invest on improving this animation.

    There is problems on the foot placement and stiffness on all of your anims, but these are things corrected with time and practice.
    As others said, invest on flow and your animations will look better.

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    Zio
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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    UUUPPDATE!!
    damn i need to work on pivot more rather than playing battlefield all day long....

    Quote Originally Posted by Zio
    wheres oblivionfall?I SOOO WANT HIM TO RANK ME ON MY THREAD :3

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    Re: animations that is pretty noobish..

    There is something just not quite right about your newest. I think it is too short for me to actually grasp what you have done correctly. The concept is quite nice, but one thing I can see is it is stiff. It seems the reaction to the push/tackle thing is very very stiff, when you are pushed like that, you don't freeze and just go with it, you would fling your arms back, etc etc, or try and brace it.


 

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