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    Fresh Newbie .Vini's Avatar
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    Super Soldier +!

    [center:1qf5qbrv]Ello People.[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]I am Vinicius, also know as Vini. Nice to meet you.[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Animations:[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Super Soldier + (Work on progress).[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv][/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Simple Runing[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Artemis Test[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Zero Sword Strike[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Falling.[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]He don't Know Equilibrium[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Purple vs Red[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Little CQC[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]LAZY made Combo[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Green Vs Purp (Lazy Made too)[/center:1qf5qbrv]

    [center:1qf5qbrv]Beginner- (26/May/2009)[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Intermediate- --/--/----[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Veteran- --/--/----[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1qf5qbrv]Elite- --/--/----[/center:1qf5qbrv]
    [center:1woa53i9][/center:1woa53i9]
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    Re: Ello. "He don't know equilibrium"

    your animation's are stop and goish making it look horrible.... and laziness is the worst excuse ever in animation im the laziest animator atleast i can try my best xd dont animate if you dont feel like it

    low beg

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    Re: Ello. "He don't know equilibrium"

    Well I wouldnt say that you are low beginner but I know you can do better than this.Laziness can be a burden but if you want to improve atleast try to edit your animations and look back so that you can spot flaws and fix them.

    Dont worry man there is always room for improvement

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    Re: Ello. Zero Sword Strike.

    Thank You Guys. 2 New animations added lol
    [center:1woa53i9][/center:1woa53i9]
    [center:1woa53i9]Rockman.EXE[/center:1woa53i9]

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    Re: Ello. Zero Sword Strike.



    ^Looks good. The main problem was the physics, he came down too fast. The physics on the uh....hair or whatever, were pretty alright though. Also, those effects looked great, good job.

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    Re: Ello. Artemis Sig Test

    Woah, Thank You. I'm still trying to improve that damn thing >.> oh, a new animation:
    [center:2ohpguaz][/center:2ohpguaz]
    [center:1woa53i9][/center:1woa53i9]
    [center:1woa53i9]Rockman.EXE[/center:1woa53i9]

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    Re: Ello. Artemis Sig Test

    OK this looks like an improvement.

    The way he went into the uppercut seemed a bit fast considering as he teleported he went into it one time.From what I can see you need to practice your spacing a bit there.The uppercut itself was pretty alright but the landing wasnt spaced properly.

    When spacing you seem to have this pattern:

    /-/--/-----/---------------/---/-/-/-/-/ - = spacing used / = frame

    You seem to heavy space alot but you do not know how to ease out of it.When heavy spacing you have to know how to go IN an OUT of it.You more or less have to follow this type of pattern:

    /-/--/---/-------/-----/---/--/-/

    When going into the attack, you have to show that he is setting up for the attack and afterwards you need to space SLIGHTLY less then the spacing used for the attack.From there you can gradulally space less and less.

    If you want to improve, work on your spacing because that is whats holding you back.
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    Re: Ello. Artemis Sig Test

    your spacing isnt very good

    l-l---l------l----------l------l---l-l
    Sigma Easing


    No Easing
    l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l


    Double Easing
    l-l--l----l--------l----l--l-l

    Flat Easing
    l-l--l---l----l-----l----l---l--l-l

    No easing is essential for things like clouds moving in the sky, a continuous camera pan or
    rainfall.

    Flat Easing dosen't have much practical use, unless maybe its for some form of electric mechanism
    or fire

    Sigma Easing is good for a rough guideline for stick movements, but never
    absolutize it unless its for a camera pan or something similar

    Absolutized Heavy Spacing is always a bad idea, though some principals
    of the style are essential to basic fighting moves

    im not a fan of double easing but i do use it at times

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    Re: Ello. "He don't know equilibrium"

    Quote Originally Posted by moderndwalfare
    your animation's are stop and goish making it look horrible.... and laziness is the worst excuse ever in animation im the laziest animator atleast i can try my best xd dont animate if you dont feel like it

    low beg
    So true man, but you gotta give the guy some encouragement, Dude ur OK but ur flow needs alot of work, see some more tutorials.

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    Re: Ello. Artemis Sig Test

    Quote Originally Posted by moderndwalfare
    your spacing isnt very good

    l-l---l------l----------l------l---l-l
    Sigma Easing


    No Easing
    l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l-l


    Double Easing
    l-l--l----l--------l----l--l-l

    Flat Easing
    l-l--l---l----l-----l----l---l--l-l

    No easing is essential for things like clouds moving in the sky, a continuous camera pan or
    rainfall.

    Flat Easing dosen't have much practical use, unless maybe its for some form of electric mechanism
    or fire

    Sigma Easing is good for a rough guideline for stick movements, but never
    absolutize it unless its for a camera pan or something similar

    Absolutized Heavy Spacing is always a bad idea, though some principals
    of the style are essential to basic fighting moves

    im not a fan of double easing but i do use it at times
    Alredy know every thing u said looooooooooong time ago. i like dd, cause u guys are so cruel. I was almost interz in other forums, but i know i wasn't in that level. that's the why i back to dd. oh, moderndwalfare next time u comment in someone topic, don't be so inflexible. I don't give a f*** but, some give, and loose their animation inspiration cause of that. ok? about the spacing, well still trying. I made this one 10 minutes ago.
    [center:2hzpfepy][/center:2hzpfepy]
    [center:1woa53i9][/center:1woa53i9]
    [center:1woa53i9]Rockman.EXE[/center:1woa53i9]


 
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