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    ask for advice

    this is my animations,,







    please give me advice on this

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    Re: ask for advice

    Great to see you have posted some animations. The power of the combo animation is nicely done, but the easing/spacing needs to be fixed, it is a little bit stop start. I would like to see something a little bit longer, so I can get a better grasp of how you animate and what you should work on.

    The walk needs a little bit of fixing, try and make the steps a little bit smaller

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    Re: ask for advice

    Quote Originally Posted by Blot
    Great to see you have posted some animations. The power of the combo animation is nicely done, but the easing/spacing needs to be fixed, it is a little bit stop start. I would like to see something a little bit longer, so I can get a better grasp of how you animate and what you should work on.

    The walk needs a little bit of fixing, try and make the steps a little bit smaller

    Courtesy? (It means if you think I commented properly, with constructive criticism, then you return the favour and comment on my thread)

    okay thanks for the criticism and suggestions,
    I will be working on it


 

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