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    Regular Member AZRA's Avatar
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    [[AZRA's Thread]] Max Payne(-ish) short



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    PISTOL ANIMATION (UNFINISHED)

    I have no idea how im gonna continue this... definitely will though, once i think of something



    JOINT WITH LUKACC100
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    this is my first ever joint.. my parts are the ones that appear after my name
    I really love the result, and im happy with my first joint

    CRUNCH!
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    Updated it in a day cause i was bored... hope you guys like it

    BLOOD TEST
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    Never really got the hang of making my own blood, so i hope i did a pretty good job at this
    whaddya guys think?

    Taken 2
    (FAVORITE)
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    Aw man, took me three days to finish this.. looks like a trailer or something, haha.. i love this
    this is pretty good imo cause i haven't animated in 5 months
    Hope you guys like it! This is my best so far!




    OLDER ANIMATIONS:

    FALL ANIMATION

    ARM BREAK

    HOOK ANIMATION

    FIRE PUNCH

    2 PUNCHES

    DEMON TRANSFORMATION
    Last edited by AZRA; 03 Jul 2013 at 12:38 PM.

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    Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]

    Uhm its very choppy and unconsistant at some parts.
    You should definitely look at some of the easing tutorials.

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    Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]

    Wow man you're not bad at all.

    The headshot one is pretty good, but you need to speed your movements up a little bit. Slow spacing can look really good but try not to overdo it. Also your foot placement could use some work, when he gets shot his feet shake around a bit when he falls. You did a pretty good job on the reaction, and you're very decent at animating blood.

    Keep up the quality of this one and you'll be intermediate very soon. Just try not to get lazy, keep your movements looking natural, and you got it. Good luck.

    Edit- Have you had an account here previously?

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    Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]

    Hey AZRA! Just came to drop a comment. (:
    That was pretty good man! Better than most of the animations most new comers make. I love the rust-breaker one. The movements were fantastic in my opinion. Anyway I suck at criticism, so I can't tell you what needs work. Nice job over all, if you need a comment again be sure to contact me!

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    Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]

    @Sleep - Yeah, i'll make sure i do, thanks

    @Kellawgs - I used to have an account in Droidz, but i stopped for a year... so my thread is long gone now... so i thought a fresh start would be good here... and thanks for the comments, they're very much Appreciated ... oh and here's my thread in Droidz ... if you're interested

    http://droidz.org/board/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=41243



    @Oliver - Thanks, means a lot...

    @All - Thanks for commenting
    After you check out my Thread...

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    Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^

    YOUR HEADSHOT ANIMATION WAS BEAUTIFUL
    Except the guy falling fell too slow, when his head fell it bounced weird and you didn't move the legs when he hit the ground.

    Overall this is a good animation though. Keep working and you'll get better

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    Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^

    Thanks bro, about the head shot thing... it's my first animation in about a year, so i can't really see the flaws while animating... thanks for pointing them out
    After you check out my Thread...

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    Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^

    Oh, no! Iam PATHENIC, you are 3 times better than me!!!!

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    Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^

    Don't compare yourself to me, cause you're better than me in your own little way... Thank's for the comment by the way, and please... keep up the good work... wait, they said you were a troll, this comment doesn't seem trollish to me =))
    After you check out my Thread...

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    Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^

    verry good! Looks awesome! You cool dude! PM me. Btw. For us to talk u have to PM me or the admins get pissed for double post
    Don't rectify, signify. we shoot anyone who does the opposite.


 
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