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  1. #1
    Dedicated Member Sleep's Avatar
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    Close this

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    Flume

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    Re: First of many?

    Not too bad, its a bit hard to rank cause of all the double framing; I'd tone down on that.

    You gotta work on your foot placement, there is little jitters on the feet which need to be fixed

    Your spacing could use a bit of work, especially when he fell down

    Nice use of backgrounds, effects and tremors; really adds a lot to an animation

    Another little thing, is assault rifles are more of a 2 handed sort of gun so using one hand takes away a bit from the the realism.

    Try add a few more frames inbetween movements and make use of a bit more easing, and tone down the double framing to show some smooth movements.

    Keep on animating, looking at your first I can tell your gonna make some animations with great entertainment value

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    Re: Hey!.......You should rank this. :D

    Hey again Sleep, came to comment on your thread. (:

    That was really nice man! I enjoyed your animation, I really suck at criticism sorry. Best thing I can say about this is maybe the flip was off. Great job man I have my eye on this thread.

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    Re: Hey!.......You should rank this. :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Oliver
    Hey again Sleep, came to comment on your thread. (:

    That was really nice man! I enjoyed your animation, I really suck at criticism sorry. Best thing I can say about this is maybe the flip was off. Great job man I have my eye on this thread.
    Thank you

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    Re: Close this

    Locked I guess, it seems you don't want this.


 

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