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    RANKING ME Lg59

    well i think this animation is uhm.. tributed to jojishi.. so yeah he inspire me alot of this.. thats why i kept on doing this...

    Broly vs Detsuka Part 1 ^_^
    this is old though like 2009
    THE gif was stop and erased by acta/pipa/sopa... so try the videos..
    [big]Click[/big]here for the video
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    first you will notice that this animation like i was really first starting yet some frames are mixed and jinked also frikin foot placement is crap so if im score scale from 1 to 10 ill score my self 6... here.. also the FPS i was still learning here on what to do with it..

    Broly vs Detsuka Part 2 /;o
    THE gif was stop and erased by acta/pipa/sopa... so try the videos..
    [big]Click[/big]Here for the video
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    second part was all banged up because im like.. RAWR i don't still know what my rank is but still foot placement here is also the problem.. oh yeah also i speed it up a little bit i don't felt right because at part 1 it was like 2 minutes then here is like 1 minutes.. so yeah... ill scale this score from 1-10 its 7..

    Broly vs. Detsuka Part 3 :@
    THE gif was stop and erased by acta/pipa/sopa... so try the videos..
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    This one is my Detsuka's story thing... so this is part one of HIS story..

    Ep3:
    [big]Click[/big]here for the video
    smull guf.. hur hur[spoiler:26alk03s][/spoiler:26alk03s]

    Ep4:Click[big]HERE! OMIGAWD THE VID IS MORE EPIC! except for lose frames.. and avi.. crap..
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    EP5: Click[big]Yeah its short.. D:
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    (sorry didn't make it like a hole post images because.. to be seen because of... the reason of lag.. )

    Old Animations:
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    New animations!
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    SDM:
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    FILLS/STICKS/AND ETC.
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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    Some parts looked Medium Beginner, and some look a little more High Beginner. Dont get discouraged by this man, if you listen it'll pay off in no time at all. You need to work on almost all of the basics. I would recommend just doing some usual tests. Though their very boring, and generic, try making atleast one a day. Post them in freestyle and you will notice how much you are improving. Also click on Darren's Tut in my signature. Look at that and study it, copy some of the animations. Good luck man, I hope I see you in the Intermediate Section someday.

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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    Med-high begginner, your style is awesome, but there are some stiff parts, and the choppyness is there, but not a major issue, try moving EVERY joint in EVERY move ment. that way you'll eliminate the the stiffness, and then only choppyness is left.
    Tip: Stiffness is where you don't move every joint.

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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    oh .my. god .Lg. look at .your .stiffness. not very good fix and easing and ur probly a med beg

    MY THREAD is AMAZINGLY suckish,good,awesome...you decide O.o
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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    Medium begginer??? Whats wrong with your eyes???? This MUST be ELITE ANIMATIONS! The deadly attacks, the teleports, the dashes,... are all AWESOME, yet not perfect. Dont worry, NOTHING IS PERFECT, RIGHT? Excellent jobs, i give u 10/10!

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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    Fly: i looked at the tutorial your saying yeah yourimg.in is a bitch.. XD i dont see the anim or the tut cuz of the acta/sopa thingy blocked it but i got what you mean

    neoflashtv: i know stiffness but you might saying about the old anims.. lol

    Soysauce: as again stiffness is one of my problems in my old anims..

    TRINHTUANTUNG: i know no bodies perfect.. and we all know that.. XD but im not that elite.. and not veteran its better to be beginner you see pp333 is not even an elite he's still a veteran :3
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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    aahhh.... lg59. The med beginner with beyond beginner ideas. Like I havent told you enough on youtube haha, but try fixing your stiffness and placement issues. Maybe you should try animating something other than dbz so practice maan. I know you can be high beginner anytime. Just fix all that.
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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    yes im trying to fix that lol but the new anims like the MAY theyre new there and others not DBZ some base movements.. and etc.
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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    LG59 you need alot more easing and flow and you are a bit stiff. ALSO in the spoiler number 2, that smoke is not yours, give credit to him idiot, that is stealing, it tells you to give him credit when you download the pack.

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    Re: RANKING ME Lg59

    Quote Originally Posted by Neoflashtv
    LG59 you need alot more easing and flow and you are a bit stiff. ALSO in the spoiler number 2, that smoke is not yours, give credit to him idiot, that is stealing, it tells you to give him credit when you download the pack.
    FYI i uploaded the video on the youtube and i did.. =.= gave credits to him.. (De8 or PP333)
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