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    Fresh Newbie zzuzzu1009's Avatar
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    please comment I am begging you

    Please tell me what I can improve!

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    Gun shot (this is my worst animation)
    http://cubeupload.com/im/JXC65j.gif

    Jumping and running
    http://cubeupload.com/im/qcuxB7.gif

    Punch and kicks


    The Box


    The ball


    Punch (old)


    Wu vs. Stickman (old)

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    Re: zzuzzu1009's thread

    I suggest you close one of your threads before the mods find you. ;_;

    Anyway, you've really got to work on your movements, mainly the arms. They were stiff throughout the whole animation and they just looked weird. The legs were shaking quite a lot too. The foot placement was also off, the stickman's foot went through the floor at one point.

    Overall, the animation lacked easing, spacing and had bad poses. I don't know what to rank you so, meh. Practice, look at some tutorials and you'll get better soon!

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    Re: zzuzzu1009's thread

    Quote Originally Posted by AlchemistEP
    I suggest you close one of your threads before the mods find you. ;_;

    Anyway, you've really got to work on your movements, mainly the arms. They were stiff throughout the whole animation and they just looked weird. The legs were shaking quite a lot too. The foot placement was also off, the stickman's foot went through the floor at one point.

    Overall, the animation lacked easing, spacing and had bad poses. I don't know what to rank you so, meh. Practice, look at some tutorials and you'll get better soon!

    ok I'll keep practicing oh and by the way your animations are really good

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    Re: zzuzzu1009's thread

    I think the tutorial section of DD will help a little. Right now you could concentrate on flow, easing and poses, kinda like AlchemistEP said. With practice you could be good in no time man

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    Re: zzuzzu1009's thread

    Your first animation was really stiff though I liked the faces on them. The second one was a little less stiff. To improve stiffness move every joint in every frame. Try and study movements in real life to improve.
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    low beginners for now
    [center:23yq8c40]PM me|thread|Freestyle[/center:23yq8c40]
    [center:23yq8c40]Fallen kingdom: 26/1500 frames est. [postponed until I get better movements]
    Juke joint: some where between 200 and 400 frames/????[/center:23yq8c40]

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    Re: zzuzzu1009's thread

    To improve I recommend moving every joint, this will help improve your stiffness.

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    Re: please comment I am begging you

    u are improving just remember to use every joint and easing

    MY THREAD is AMAZINGLY suckish,good,awesome...you decide O.o
    viewtopic.php?f=2&t=88680
    ^?u?? ??? ?????^ .___________.

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    Re: please comment I am begging you

    Since you begging me to comment so i will accept.Ok, first... Hahahahahahah! This guy's animations are actually AWESOME! I LOVE VIOLENT ANIMATIONS!!!
    Try to make Massacre animations like me because it will X4 the violence! I'll keep one eye on this thread, the other eye is for my thread!


 

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