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    Update*

    [img]http://**********.com/img/1345837468.gif[/img]

    Older stuff:

    Smooooooth
    http://**********.com/img/1338773847.gif
    More stuff
    http://**********.com/img/1338129058.gif
    Unfinished joint with Strider
    http://**********.com/img/1337966621.gif
    [center:1tvaqn09][img]http://**********.com/img/1338845911.jpg[/img][/center:1tvaqn09]

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by TRINHTUANTUNG
    Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!
    You're a dick. ^

    I've found quite a few flaws in this.

    I thought the running was odd because it was bouncy and un-eased. It took me a while to realise what was wrong. The thing that struck me first was the movement in the legs, both legs seem choppy and don't flow very well, remember to follow the onion skin for flow.

    The other problem I'd address is the flip at the end. I thought this was really weird as there was a lack of build up and momentum. It's difficult to see the amount of power behind this flip as it seems 'floppy'? Anyway, I was going slightly off topic. The flip, I was going to go on about the end pose. The pose was quite bad as the stickman's back is vertical. Judging by the speed and distance, I'd expect the stickman's back to be arched, with his arms infront of him. I thought the flip was quite unrealistic.

    E* The majority of the poses were quite odd too. I don't want to spend a lot of time explaining what poses are off because there are quite a lot.

    Overall, you need to practice easing and spacing for the most parts. Once you've got the hang of those, work on your poses. (Or the other way round) Keep practicing man, you'll get better.


    Is this a joint with Strider? It doesn't look like it. Also, ignore the bellend above me.

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by TRINHTUANTUNG
    Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!
    cool spam bro

    Also to the second comment, this was made in about 5 minutes, I'm rusty as shit but i wasn't really going for Elite or anything, don't quite need the realism yet, thanks anyway i spose'
    >Also yes it is a joint, strider made the starting kick and the standing up part, but he was lazy as shit, so i just left it as short as it is
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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by comedian
    Quote Originally Posted by TRINHTUANTUNG
    Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!
    cool spam bro

    Also to the second comment, this was made in about 5 minutes, I'm rusty as shit but i wasn't really going for Elite or anything, don't quite need the realism yet, thanks anyway i spose'
    Well, that was 2 hours wasted. :P
    Once you've made an animation where you have taken your time, please let me know. I would like to see it.

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by AlchemistEP
    Well, that was 2 hours wasted. :P
    Once you've made an animation where you have taken your time, please let me know. I would like to see it.
    Will do
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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Once u failed, let me know, i will insult you along with AlchemistEP! Your welcome!

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by TRINHTUANTUNG
    Once u failed, let me know, i will insult you along with AlchemistEP! Your welcome!
    You're not a good animator yet you insult everyone else.
    You're just a waste of sperm and you should cut your throat with some glass. Seriously.

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by AlchemistEP
    Quote Originally Posted by TRINHTUANTUNG
    Once u failed, let me know, i will insult you along with AlchemistEP! Your welcome!
    You're not a good animator yet you insult everyone else.
    You're just a waste of sperm and you should cut your throat with some glass. Seriously.
    Thank you my LOVELY BUDDY! You are the BEST! I admire you!

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    Re: Short joint with Strider (short enough)

    Quote Originally Posted by TRINHTUANTUNG
    Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!
    Your animations are disgusting go fuck yourself man.
    The sky is fallin, the wind is callin; Stand fer something or die in tha mornin'-#section80:Hii power-Kendrick Llamar
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