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    Imuo9s Thread

    So yeah I'm a beginner and just got on here. Using Pivot 4 (Awsome, but still no tween ) . Here's some of my anims. I know some of them suck . Opinions?
    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]My First Pivot Anim
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    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]Never Trust A Dino (Quick anim)
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    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]Physics (I really like this one)
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    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]Run!
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    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]Maybe Next Time (Sucks)
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    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]Invincibo
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    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]How Chocolate kisses are really made (How I got this idea, i'll never know )
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    UPDATE:
    Made a running anim:

    [spoiler:3mtp9wqn]Someone Please comment?[/spoiler:3mtp9wqn]

    UPDATE: Improvement?

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    Re: So heyy!

    Ok, you're a low beginner and there are some concepts you'll need to understand to advance here.

    1st you're going to need to understand stiffness, you're animations are extremely stiff, you need to move every red dot in every frame. so if you move an arm, you move the rest of the body too.

    2nd thing you are going to need is to focus on movement, a lot of you're movements don't make sense because you skip a lot of frames. slow movements down and they should make more sense.

    I do however like how long and fairly entertaining you've made them so good job on that part and I hope to see more from you

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    Re: So heyy!

    Thanks for the feedback
    I was working on an anim, but wont have much time till Thursday

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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    Added an update!

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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    Your anims are creative which is good but you have a lot of things to improve on such as spacing and easing I see promise in you
    Thread=http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f...67420#p1767420

    Quote Originally Posted by Animedude
    What The FUCK!

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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    Ah, someone finally took a look
    Annywho, I made a 3D thingie:

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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    Nice 3d Buutt you should probably move every joint in every frame otherwise good job on that
    Thread=http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f...67420#p1767420

    Quote Originally Posted by Animedude
    What The FUCK!

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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    Improved it a bit. Notice a difference?


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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    The legs on the landing shouldn't snap like that. If you are going for 3D, you should utilize the functions of Pivot 4, and shorten the lower legs. Try and make it like the stick is really bending, with his knees moving forward, like he would in real life.

    Also, you should reduce the spacing. Flesh out those movements more, the fps seems too high for your spacing style.

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    Re: Imuo9s Thread

    Whoa, thats too much effort. Animating is a hobby but I'm not patient enough to do so much work on one anim, I just like slapping sticks around. Moving on... All that plus i'm too lazy


 
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