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Thread: Sup

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    Fresh Newbie Karcex's Avatar
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    Sup

    Hey guys, whats up? Welcome to my thread! I know that im beginer, but here is my few animations.
    [centerr6h742b]Newest[/centerr6h742b]
    [centerr6h742b][img]http://**********.com/img/1362308644.gif[/img][/centerr6h742b]
    [centerr6h742b]Others[/centerr6h742b]
    [centerr6h742b]Some DBZ[/centerr6h742b]
    [centerr6h742b]Bitch, who can run.[/centerr6h742b]
    Omfg, not much huh? I lost almost all of my animations, so i will make more.
    [centerr6h742b]Peace![/centerr6h742b]

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    Senior Member manmat1's Avatar
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    Re: Sup yal

    Welcome.
    First of all, I would avoid using any effects and just focus on movements.
    On the first one the foot-placement was off - there isn't much else to rate.
    The yellowing out effect was cool.

    For the DBZ one, way too many effects and the majority of them were done lazily, the movements were choppy in places.
    The main problem was stiffness, there was a lot of completely static parts, make a character always move - unless they're dead.

    The running one was nice - the best there imo - but you need to add a few more frames in to ease the strides a little more + the amrs were stiff, they should swing out as they come toward the body slightly.
    I say med beginner because although the running was nice, the over used effects and stiffness bring you down on average. Do some simple animations with NO effects at all. =]
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    Quote Originally Posted by Win_Guy
    Energy doesn't obey the laws of physics

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    Fresh Newbie Karcex's Avatar
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    Re: Sup

    Guys, comment, there will be more soon.

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    Re: Sup

    Quote Originally Posted by Karcex
    Guys, comment, there will be more soon.
    Lol don't expect many comments, Since coming back I have had 2 comments, since my last 3 updates I have had NO comments
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    Quote Originally Posted by Win_Guy
    Energy doesn't obey the laws of physics

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    Re: Sup

    I liked your newest. The first scene was great, nice use of cinematic camera angles and the smoke effect was awesome. The second scene wasn't too great, the stickmans entrance looked heavy but the response in the landing was soft, a tremor or crack effect would add a lot more power to that. I also thought that bright yellow fade away effect looked a bit chunky and all over the place. But I liked where the animation was going, with the cinematics you added it looked like a movie from dbz.

    Great stuff

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    Re: Sup

    I loved the start and the smoke just epic but when the stickman entered it seemed too fast and the spacing was just too much. I think it's brill just the stickdude that's all also his knee positioning when he lands makes the lift-off pretty weird.


 

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