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    Last edited by Fire; 02 Nov 2013 at 12:56 AM. Reason: Joint with Domination
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    Inters pls

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    Update :/

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    Not too much to comment on as there isn't a whole lot of movement, but overall it's pretty well spaced.

    For criticism, I'd say stop cutting the movement and scene. You actually used a transition and showed the exact same angle which entirely pointless and just disrupts the flow, it'd be nicer of all those movements following the explosion linked together in a single camera angle and shot - makes it much clearer, cleaner and easier to follow and enjoy. I'd also recommend in future you use changing sticks to show the smoke instead of just resizing the one stick, looks pretty lazy. Some fills on the city wouldn't go astray seeing as you backgrounds and camera movements are very easy to do with pivot 4. You showed a lot of smoke yet their are no cracks, holes, indents from his massive landing when he crouches down. There isn't a lot to complain about the movements themselves as they were well done, then again there isn't a whole lot shown in this animation. I guess it would also be nice to see a demonstration of your stick fighting to make it a complete and proper preview.

    The sword animation below is very nice, well done on that.

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    There really isn't anything to critique yet on the newest animation, the movements are nice and smooth. Lush has ptetty much said it all, however the electricity effect could use some more particles. Keep it up I'll give you some cc when you make it longer.

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    Dateup

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    bad luck samurai

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    decent animations there, the sword animation is good, no stiffness or choppiness. Could do with few more frames in between movements though.
    The second animation is good, the smoke could have some more particles. I like the cinematic black sides you have at the top and bottom.
    The electricity is good for the...galvaknuckles are they? nothing wrong with these at all.

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    I iz sword tricks

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    frrrrrrrgfdzsghtrfsyhghghhhhhhhhgfsdhgfdhgfcdhgtfdhyt


 
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