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    Post MonoMial's Animations

    Welcome to my animation thread!
    I'm MonoMial, and first of all I have to say that I haven't clicked to Pivot icon for 1,5 years on my desktop and I've been out of practice naturally so I'm doing animations to kill my rust nowadays.
    You can see my old and new era animations in this thread. I hope you'll like them.

    Newest
    Box Travelers (I hope it will be continued.)

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    New Era
    Smiley / .piv file
    Practice on Physics / .piv file

    Old Era
    Unnamed / .piv file
    Sanji Kicks / .piv file
    MonoMial is Bored / .piv file
    Very Fast Fighting / .piv file
    Come Back Animation (old) / .piv file
    Fake! / .piv file
    Understick Animation Contest / .piv file
    W.C. Combo / .piv file
    TRGG Base Movements / .piv file
    Blood / .piv file
    Shaolin Movements / no .piv file
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    I'm really impressed with your style! You have nice movements and very creative ideas and I enjoyed your Box Travelers animation quite a bit. I also like the way you animate your stickmen walking. That's something I never have the patience to animate: walking. All my stickmen sprint full force or jump around.

    I only have a couple small things to critique you on. First and foremost, I would recommend editing your base figure just a bit and maybe add some more joints into it's back. Right now a lot of your movements are a little stiff and awkward because the figure's back only has one joint.

    Second, and I only noticed this in your "Smiley" animation, don't over-ease your movements. Easing is incredibly important in making your animations look better and more realistic, but too much can disrupt the flow of your animations. That's something I've had trouble with for a long time.

    Aside from those two points, I have no other criticism to give you. Great job on your animations, and keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more from you!
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    that was quite entertaining! The movements were relatively smooth and this was a nice long animation, great work mate! Now, some of the movements were a little shaky, and a lot of the poses seemed extremely off balance, keep in mind that in some places the stick man would have fallen over, but he didn't.

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    These are some good animations. You've eased the stickmen really well and your newest(box travelers) looks really good. But the movements are a little bit too slow and they are shaky in some places. Otherwise your anims are good and don't have anything else to say, so i'll just rate you med-high beginner .
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    ^^^ I disagree with animedude, the animations' slow movements are really quite pleasant, continue like that please :3.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neo View Post
    ^^^ I disagree with animedude, the animations' slow movements are really quite pleasant, continue like that please :3.
    Now i feel bad
    Stickpage ftw

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    Great anims bro... You have good flow and a funny/good style that i like . Keep up the good work
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    Quote Originally Posted by Animedude12 View Post
    Now i feel bad
    No need to feel bad man, it's your opinion :P

    Anyway, as many others have said, your animations are really nice and such. There are a few faults with spacing perhaps, but that can be sorted out after. The main thing that you should work on for now is shakyness, as it is happening somewhat frequently in your animations. Good luck man

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    Thank you all for comments. And especially for yours Deimos. I'll try to accord your suggestions.
    Sorry for my bad English.
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