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    Fresh Newbie ZedSP's Avatar
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    Animations.

    new animation, not really proud of it but I tried?



    Older animations
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    Last edited by ZedSP; 15 Jul 2013 at 10:12 PM.

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    Wow, these are pretty impressive. One thing I could say though is when on the first animation, when the guy with the crooked legs kicks the other guy and the other guy falls, the pose for it isn't very good, I mean if someone kicked you in the back, would you fall forward with your arms by your sides and your legs side by side? But I loved all of these despite that flaw.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lordpivot44 View Post
    Wow, these are pretty impressive. One things I could say though is when on the first animation, when the guy with the crooked legs kicks the other guy and the other guy falls, the pose for it isn't very good, I mean if someone kicked you in the back, would you fall forward with your arms by your sides and your legs side by side? But I loved all of these despite that flaw.

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    Courtesy?
    http://www.animator.net/forum/pivot-...nimations.html
    Thank you. Yes, I did quite rush that fall, so I can't really defend it. Courtesy will be returned.

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    Great animation's.low-med interz.

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    I like the stick figure you used in your latest animation. Your movements were fluid and you have good easing. The only flaw, which has been stated before, is the way the regular figure falls. He should probably fall more face-first rather than chest first being that he seemed to be kicked in the back of the neck, not his spine.

    So far I'd put you right around high beginner. You have quite a bit of potential, but in order to rank up you should experiment more with different camera angles/movements, effects, backgrounds as well as make a few longer animations.

    Keep it up!
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    Not bad at all, I like your spacing style there, just the poses look a bit awkward and the spacing isn't always consistent. Don't bend the back over so much, it needs to be straighter. Good work though.

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    These anims are OK.
    But i really hate that you dont move the back joints evry frame than you just stop moving it for a frame and it looks stiff than. And the poses are really weird in some parts it's even stop and go cause you dont ease much and so the movements looks really weird, work on spacing.
    Thats all.

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    The only thing I saw is that the flip coming in was weird. Rather than that, pretty good!

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    Hey it's Zed! That's a really cool animation. I like how original it is. I mean how often do you see someone animate a stick with two leg joints. Whats interesting is that you didn't animate it like an average man, you actually took into account the shape of his legs and animated him more like a kangaroo. For the most part your spacing looks great, I'm not sure what some people above me are talking about. Maybe in some of your older animations I can see a slight jerk in the spacing, but not really in your newest one. Anyways, my favorite part of this animation is right after he kicks the guy in the back of the neck. That backwards roll he does to get rid of some of his momentum was perfect. I like seeing you post around here. You should try to be a little more active.


 

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