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    Cool [First Post] My first animation in a while

    Here's a little sword slash I made, I haven't animated in FOREVER. The last time I did, this website was darkdemon.org and I was a beginner
    Anyways, anyways, enjoy



    Nothing great, but I'd like you guys to be honest here. I don't care if you have to be mean, just gimme the facts

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    its not too bad actually, its fairly smooth, with fluid motions, kind of stiff but not bad for being gone for a while, im in the same boat haha, check out my stuff?? thread below!? thanks, n keep it up, itll come back to ya

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    Thanks for the tips & tricks I'll be sure to take a look at your animations too
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    welcome back to Animator.net, I only joined 6 months ago and i'm still a beginner.

    The animation was not too good. Foot placement is shaky, his arms are a bit wobbly when he reaches in for the sword. His back is stiff too
    Personally now, I think that he doesn't extend his arms enough when he swings the sword. Your easing is slightly off, but I don't mind that.

    Rank: low-med beginner
    Advice: Work on fluid, foot placement, and keep pushing yourself on.
    Courtesy: http://www.animator.net/forum/pivot-...nimations.html


 

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