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[Luka]

You animate well man. Try to ease some little and the kicks/punches don't have any buikd up/they don't show power... You're Med Beginner, but ranks simply don't matter, you gotta have fun when animating. I really liked the idea.. Keep it up!

[Chris]

Oh dear, you really deserve some more comments.

That was a really great animation right there. It reminded me so much of goukakyou or Zaedokun when I was a fresh animator like you. Those guys really inspired me a lot to animate and I really wanted to aim for the style they had. You, yes you could actually do such a style. Keep developing it you are doing really great and I see that you will be able to reach intermediate in certain time man. So keep going and animate!

[Secretname911]

I suggest you move every single one of those red nodes, without moving all of them, it'll be hard to move any rank higher. Once you do that you'll have a high paced, non-stop style, which thats the style most people on DD like.
Keep it up.
Courest Returned.

[MCToast]

Chris, you make me miss the old times ; -;

This were surpirisingly good, next step would be to learn to get rid of stop and go style or develope it to something that works.

[dalmascan64]

Thank you guys for the comments and advice. I will work hard to improve and hopefully it will be even more intermediate worthy.

[lordpivot44]

Red vs Blue, such a classic.

[dalmascan64]

Update - so pretty much I took out all of the "Stop and Goes". I work'd on my run, and some of my 3D effects. I also add'd some environmental effects and some tremor.

[dalmascan64]

UPDATE!!! LOOK UP ^

[dalmascan64]

Update Peoples! So look above ya' heads. (Not literally!)

[lordpivot44]

A few poses are off, along with the easing, the flow and a few other small issues. Just watch some of Senzo's or Oblivionfall's are Wraybies's animations. Download the pivs, study them frame by frame for the movements and make another animation.