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    First Pivot

    It's 2 versions, the regular one, and a very bad sword test. Rate it please.












    Death ball(blood test =p)



    (Version 2)

    NewestAnd best)

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    Ok Thanks, Im looking at it now, Im posting my run thing, I just did it, It's better than i was =p

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    bahamuts ultimate tutorial should make a before-after comparison definately.

    all of them were just 241jh4132l1!!!!! and that is so bad its not funny.
    dont worry your starting, i was just like you with those asdafadfgaasfa animations.


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    I updated with a physics thing, It shows a guy(FF50'sGuy and background) Hovering through a city, then i have him speeding up, then a blur effect, and then slow motion.

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    Got potential, ill list a few things here you need to work on-
    1. Movement. Too fast and choppy. Try making more frames per movement, and less space between the onionskins
    2. Backgrounds. Add some .stk backgrounds in there so you have a basis for your sticks to walk/ land on, otherwise they tend to float.
    3. Physics. The throws and jumps and such are horribly unrealistic

    Read some tutorials, study some peoples animations. Try and download the .pivs made by elites and study them frame-by-frame.

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    Thanks, I'll work on that stuff and remake my first pivot =)

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    Sorry for the double post, i added a new one, i also couldn't see my last post was still there, once again, sorry.

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    im glad you're having fun but if you wan't them too be more interesting i would reccomend listening to my advice.

    and there are tons of good blood tutorials in the pivot tutorial section, if you don't like to do them the proper way, then maybe you should start with some movement upgrades. i have an idea...


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    Ok ok, i just got my last fun one, I tested a style of blood on it though, it was fun plus a test =p, tell me what you think, it's a bit basic but i like it.

    Also I have a new one, The skate one, Better blood, i used 3 lines of blood instead of 2 for it.(thickest, thinner, thinnest)

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    You have a new thread, this ones getting locked.


 

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