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  1. #1
    Newbie rebmund10's Avatar
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    Cool Rebmund's thread

    Here are my current animations:

    2014:
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    Kill Sacred collab entry

    Most Wanted tryout

    Acrocanthosaurus test

    All tied up

    2013:
    Spoiler:

    Hot Floor
    Last edited by rebmund10; 20 Feb 2014 at 11:56 AM.

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    First anim :
    -when gray climbs up the stairs, his arms don't move at all. You have to move them a little at each frame.
    -when he jumps, he stops in mid air : flow-breaking, but funny and stylish. His arms should go upward earlier to follow the entire body's movements.
    -very nice floor transformation. is it yours ?

    Second anim :
    -I really love the little bouncing part, really realistic and smoothy.
    -But the combo has many mistakes, here is some advices :

    Try to exaggerate the hits, the gray stickman has not to be 100% flow when he receives hits from the red guy.
    Also, some of his hits were very feeble, he has to move the entire body foward grayman to strengthen the blow.
    And the projection has made a gravity change. Before you choose a move, analyse if the positions/placements of the sticks are a minimum convenient.
    Better use a powerful punch in the stomach to let grayman eat the burning floor.

    rank ? I would say med-beginner.

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    New Animation above

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    New Animation above

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    I liked how the feet were animated in the Acrocanthosaurus test, but the arms were a bit static. For your newest animation I think that the beginning could have been better, but other than that well done. I'd like to see some longer animations from you


 

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