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    Short Shoryuken


    Short and sweet. Comments?

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    Need to work on your build up and let down and the timing of the whole thing. It would look much more powerful if you'd bend his legs more, move him closer to the ground, and then have him punch up into the air. Definitely work on basics before trying this. The turn is pretty good and so is the landing. His arms also look like they're very confused before he jumps, switching back and forth like that.
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    Adding onto what rPolarBear's mentioned, you could have moved the back. It didn't move at all. If you showed his upper body bending down before the punch, and then straightening out with the punch it would have added some power. The animation's pretty smooth though so that's good.

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    Stiffness is your problem, build up too but yea...stiffness is your main problem.
    His back didn't move, the second arm too, and his legs didn't move enough, now it just looks like he raise up ftom nothong, but it's done pretty smooth, but the end wasn't good too.

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    Thanks for the criticism, but I won't be able to redo it until pivot works on Win. 8 TT.TT
    (EDIT: Lies! McAfee just kept on deleting the "trojan" and it wouldn't work!)
    Last edited by RPGOverplayer; 14 Jan 2014 at 10:02 PM.


 

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