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Thread: (Hisoka) Hyper Realism (JK) Update

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    (Hisoka) Hyper Realism (JK) Update

    Hey Everyone! Welcome to my Thread! Criticism of any Kind is Welcomed
    First Animation in a Very Long While


    Hyper Realism


    Acro



    Older Stuff
    Some smooth stuff

    Second Acro attempt

    Spinny kicks

    First Acro Attempt (In a while)



    Thanks for Stopping by!
    Last edited by Hisoka; 10 Feb 2014 at 08:32 PM.
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    Just ended up going with the double framed combo type kicky thingy.

    (First update)

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    No need to double post on the same day. Just keep updating the first post of the thread as you did.


    On the "double frame" combo thingy, do you really know how the double frame technique works ? (i don't)

    It's okay for the quality, there is some power and easing, but it's very short and the physics are irregular.
    acrobatics : looks like his feet are magnetised to the ground at the end of the sommersault.
    combo : the landing is choppy, and i can't see what the arms are doing.

    Try to make longer animations, that really helps to improve yourself.

    I'd say Med beginner for now.

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    Not bad, you should work a bit more on your easing though. In that double kick combo animation, everything seemed as if it was happening too fast, and that you were jumping into different movements with little to no easing at all. In the backflip animation, I couldn't really spot too much wrong with it, other than at the end where the stick just kind of rocks backward, it seemed awkward, and the way he landed steadily in that squat-like pose lacked realism. Overall, the animations were decent. If you were looking for a rank or something I personally would say med-low beginner.

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    Update!
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    Update!!!

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    The last one is nice.
    The roll is well done.

    But how is he moving up ?
    The leg is already extended on the ground, and there is a 1-frame touch on the wall, that's not enough to launch him. (for realism)
    The spinning speed is irregular : it's fast in the beginning, and slow at the end. Is he doing jumps in water ? Does he have invisible rocket boots ?
    (maybe this can be inspiration for other anims )


    Also, the landing may have been eased well, but it better needs a spring effect (land -> go down then go up),

    Overall : you're on the good way.

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    well your wall flip was a little stale i mean a little stretch of the foot and arms or shorten it during the flip would be nice its a med beginner but its fine 6/10

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    Update! Also thank you everyone for the feedback, I think this is my best work yet!

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    o: Bro that was pretty good, I feel how you improve in every animation you make :'0 that anim reminds me of Senzo's style, keep like this, you are doing it right!


 
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