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Thread: Rate my animation please.. ;)

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    Cool Rate my animation please.. ;)

    Hello there!

    I just wanna to show my animation, before i have some thread, but that's gone, i don't know why,

    And this is my new project..

    Inception
    *Unfinished
    Last Updated at 21/02/2014 00:48
    Last edited by abidzarmh; 20 Feb 2014 at 05:48 PM.

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    I must say, I'm impressed by this.
    Your poses are fine, spacing is fine, everything is good but one thing... the gun is too big, far too big.
    Just keep doing what your doing and you won't be too long getting to intermediates.

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    That's looking pretty good so far, I liked the poses you used for the landind, actually it's really good, there are no many flaws to be honest, just one thing, I felt like you didn't easied to well at the landing, when he landed it was fine, but you should have slow the movement and ease it more when he starts running, I think it's done a bit fast, and the pistol is a little to big as said, keep it up bro!

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    I've found it here. Do you want to revive that one or keep this one?

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    Well, i know it, xD that gun was too big, by the way thanks for your rating!


 

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