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  1. #1
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    [iluvatar]Welcome to my hell.

    Let's start.


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    Just practising to get the rhythm. Don't expect too much.

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    dude....Definitely I high beginner, maybe borderline intermediate. I did see some shakiness though

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    I'd personally give it about a medium beginner rank. Everything is just too stiff, try to make every joint move in every frame. It was still a very good animation, just could use a bit more movement.

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    I'd move those legs, definitely move the legs, it would look 10x better.
    But it's not bad, med-high beginner.

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    If you really want to push things further, I'd say the bow would throw the arrow with a very strong spacing, and has a little bouncy effect on the string right after the shot.
    Also, the stickman should straigthen when bending the bow, and relax after each shot.

    On the other hand i really like all the details you put on this anim. Keep it on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by D4zh View Post
    dude....Definitely I high beginner, maybe borderline intermediate. I did see some shakiness though
    I think that was to emphasize how much he was pulling, and that it was harder for the stickman to aim correctly.


    I thought the animation was really good, pleasant surprise when I clicked on the link. Anton pretty much said everything needed to be said in my opinion, stay active welcome to DD

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheSpectre View Post
    I think that was to emphasize how much he was pulling, and that it was harder for the stickman to aim correctly.


    I thought the animation was really good, pleasant surprise when I clicked on the link. Anton pretty much said everything needed to be said in my opinion, stay active welcome to DD
    Maybe stiffness was the correct word. But yes Anton did state everything pretty well

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    this is good so just move every joint and loose the stiffness


 

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