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  1. #1
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    All of my favorite anis by me

    alright i may have been in pivot for two years but this is my first day in darkdemon forums. so here is how i good i animate.





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    theyre already nice but i think that at the flashbang one the guy moves his hand too quick ... try to give him some more *middle* movements so his hand doesnt just jump up and down

    on the animation on the bottom somehow all is a bit too slow and youll have to try to make the blood from frame to frame a bit smaller and the exploding head ... um thats too much of a sprite thing there i like the explosion thought.

    you better check a bit in the tutorial forum

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    your animations are ok, kinda smooth, and the movements for the punching were ok, but other movements werent too good. You should always have a floor in your animations, and adding in a background is even better. I suggest you go into pivot tutorials section and study all of the tuts on movment, spacing, kicking punching, effects etc.

    and plz do not put the animations into a pic, plz replace them with a link

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    Wow, you've used pivot for two years?
    You must be a slow learner then >.>
    They are really choppy, movements are kinda retarded, and your basic movements need loads of improvement, running walking all that shiite.
    Practice more and make longer stuff..
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    2 Years?!, i find that hard to believe...But anyway, your animations are quite choppy and the physics are off, keep practicing and check out some tutorials.
    Don't underestimate teh n00b's =]



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    cool

    u tryed and acheived good job but ther very short and abit choppy
    the effects wernt very good
    but the movement waz alright like i sayed just choppy

    work hard and acheive

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    Not bad, work on smoothness and stiffness. Add some effects.

    7/10 for Bzon

    Med Begginer

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    http://www.forums.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=11912
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bahamut
    It's actually very good. Really smooth, and the first couple of punches looked fairly realistic. But, the way it ended was really weird. Fix it, lol.
    Bahamut complementing my animations?!?! Its a dream come true!!

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    good ani work on effects though. your'e still good i'd say low begginer mabye med begginer.


 

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