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  1. #1
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    Pvt Pancakes's Animations

    Wasn't sure where I belong thus I started here. Onto the animations.

    Here Is a shotgun sequence:
    http://img180.imageshack.us/my.php?image=diete7.gif

    Back When My stick figures could not walk, The Game:
    http://img180.imageshack.us/my.php?image=thegamecw3.gif

    Lawler Skates:
    http://img242.imageshack.us/my.php?i...rskatesiy7.gif

    How do you think. Sorry for no background or ground:
    http://img293.imageshack.us/my.php?i...vsclonevp6.gif
    My Life Is Like A Rubix's Cube. Small, Colorful, And Twisted!


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    everyone starts in the beginners hall so good guess,
    your animations were pretty choppy and had bad movements.
    i suggest you go into the tut section and study all the tuts. eg: spacing, backgrounds, walking, moving etc

    4-5/10

    low beginner

    courtesah?
    my animations COURTESAH?






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    Humor me. I have improved In walking but I agree it was choppy. Also the game was an older one. But I do it for a somwhat, humor. That's why I Pivot.
    My Life Is Like A Rubix's Cube. Small, Colorful, And Twisted!


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    well well well the game idea was nice but the missing walking makes it look weird. on the shotgun test the stick moves too less while shooting and there is only a bit fire getting out of the gun .. nothing else? well at least its a good start

    courtesy?

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    With the shotgun animtion, trying and add a tremor effect to make it more realistic and with teh game animation i thought it was a pretty good idea, could ahve been better if it was longer and all the stks were moving to some extent.
    Don't underestimate teh n00b's =]



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  6. #6
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    The shotgun was cool. Just make the shell fade away.

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    well its good u came 2 begginer

    well its good u came 2 begginer otherwise u woulda got flamed but tha same as
    assorted chocolates work on those tuts



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    Quote Originally Posted by Sneakers07
    The shotgun was cool. Just make the shell fade away.
    Make it fade away? no, actually that would make it look gay. anyway work on smoothness, realism, and effects. I hereby sentence you to read bahamut's ultimate tut
    Mankind must end war, or war will end mankind.
    BTW CHECK OUT MAI FLASH THREAD!
    CLICK ON Meh!!!

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    Already read it. but i'm getting there. And yes it was Bahamut's.
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    Work on smoothness as well as stiffness. Also, the flash from the shotgun seems too long, try making it only one frame, maybe adding bullets, and giving the guy a reaction somewhere besides his arms

    6/10 for Bzon

    Low Begginer

    Courtesy?
    My thread:
    http://www.forums.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=11912
    Courtesy?

    Quote Originally Posted by Bahamut
    It's actually very good. Really smooth, and the first couple of punches looked fairly realistic. But, the way it ended was really weird. Fix it, lol.
    Bahamut complementing my animations?!?! Its a dream come true!!

    I am Jewish. I am tired of all the anti-semitic crap on DarkDemon. Such as the Jew burning symbol, or the sig that says BURN ALL TEH JOOZE. What I say to these people is thise: BURN IN HELL MOTHER FUCKERS!


 
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