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    my fisrt

    hi guys

    i'm new to the forum and new to the pivot thing in total.
    i started yesterday and finished my first today.

    so here it is, i hope you guys ( and girls ) like it.

    http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/2650 ... nalfe8.gif

    Grtz,
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    Wow, thats pretty funny!
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    wow that was a very long and good animation, for a first. you still need to improve many stuff bevore you can go to inter. for example walking and getting a higher framerate would help to. its stillvery choppy and stiff but with some training you'll improve very quick! just go check some tutorials in the tutorial section of this very own forum (i recommande bahamuts tutorial)

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    Niiice. great storyline, but yeah, work on smoothness and whatnot. not saying that i'm any better... that exceeds my longest animation by a good 300%, at least.

    And when the wall fell on him? i TOTALLY called that.
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    Well, you need to work on stuff.

    Effects: The things flying in the air, and the wall falling, were really bad effects, work on it.

    Static: It might've been better in the process of making sticks that you make some lines static.

    Smoothness: Don't make one movement and click "Next Frame" more than once if they're going to move soon.

    Physics: That flip over the wall was totally bad. Make more movements over the wall with different frames.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chaos618
    Wow, thats pretty funny!
    dont spam with comments like this

    your animation wasnt bad, but you need to add a floor, it would make it easier to see where to place his feet, because sometimes the sticks feet were below the wall.
    plz do not use default sticks, try downloading some, or make some of your own.
    finally, look in the tut section for walking, smoothness, stuff like that

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    that was funny that makes it good
    but it sucked
    to choppy and un realistic
    and slow
    5.5/10
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