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    Veteran Enthusiast Lt. Longrods's Avatar


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    Tell me what's wrong..

    Could somebody tell me what is wrong with this animation so far? It took me a while just to make this and it still doesn't look right. If anybody else thinks it doesn't look right could you tell me what's wrong with it?

    http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3...edfightjy8.gif

    And here is my newer version with what people told me to change to it (thank you for those who helped). Tell me if it is better and what I can change still.

    http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9...edfighttp1.gif

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    I dont like the bend in the leg.
    And I hate the onionskin thing, remove that.

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    I think it would look like he's running faster if he made smaller steps, and you took out the onion-skin thing like apples said.
    Try that and see if it helps.

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    Apples what do you mean the bend in the leg?

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    I think he means the close up stomp at the start.

    The trail thing looks horrid, remove it.

    Listen to what everyone else said.
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    true the trail is not working with the amination...

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    Yes the trail looks bad. If you have a trail like that then he should be either moving faster than that, or in slow motion.

    Also the whole thing could use some easing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sir_Wojak
    Yes the trail looks bad. If you have a trail like that then he should be either moving faster than that, or in slow motion.

    Also the whole thing could use some easing.
    Win. Ease it out, get rid of the trail, and get rid of the bend in the initial stomp. That should e better
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    Here's my newER version. Please tell me if it is better. And tell me what I can fix to make it better than this. I hope to make a better version later.

    http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9...edfighttp1.gif

    Sorry bout the bump but I thought I would have to post this here.. right?

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    i seem to like it better, yes. the stomp was smoother. i lieky
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