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    2 retards 1 ball

    [center:3p8vvh36]Josemetal's Thread
    2 retards 1 ball:

    So, i was trying to animate something different from fightning, i wanted to do something funny, it was cool to animate, however i'm a little rusty D:

    Wusuke vs Ninja:

    Wusuke combo:
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1357606992.gif[/img]
    Inside dark box fight:
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1357593651.gif[/img]
    Fullbody wu vs another guy:
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1357419401.gif[/img]
    Shadow of the colossus
    Little fight
    Closed box 2
    Closed box
    Stupid guy
    Catty fight

    So yeah, all my old anims were lost on pivotup, those are new stuff.
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    I'm Brazilian, sorry for my bad english XD
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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    woah... your actually pretty good...
    just work on your stiffness an spacing and maybe some easing...
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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    You got some good animations, but you should work on the stiffness, other than that good job!

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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    I don't know what that flexible stick (reaction test) is made of, but I think it moves for too long a time after the hit. Other than that you animate better than me.

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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    Whoa that Wu vs Bert animation was really well done. I'll go through the GOOD and BAD points about the animation, so you know what to improve on next time.

    Good: Well first of all it was pretty entertaining, and exciting being fast paced. You have a basic knowledge about the fundamentals which is also nice. Movements were pretty good for your level as well. The lighting on Bert when he was charging the beam was awesome as well, you don't see many beginners attempting stuff like that. The beam was nicely done, though i'm not sure if you made it. The end idea was fucking awesome with all the limbs falling to the ground with blood, sick job there.

    Now here is some advice on how to improve.
    Bad points: Ok well one of your main problems is spacing, it's too fast to be believable. Slow it down on your next animations. Secondly, stiffness is one of your main issues, move the limbs more in each frame and use more frames to smoothen the animation out. Lastly, use more easing as well, it helps the animation be more fluent and more pleasant to the eye.

    Keep it up, you're doing really well, just fix up your spacing and stiffness.

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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    Thank you, i followed your critics and tad„„:
    http://pivotup.com/files/07ridbz1.gif
    A preview of Bert vs Wu 2
    Enjoy
    EDIT: Now done...
    I'm Brazilian, sorry for my bad english XD
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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    Those are very good for beginner. All you have to do is make a few minor adjustments like smoothness easing foot placement.... And you'll be intermediate in no time.
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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    talk about amazing for a beginner you should set up a poll to see how peaple rank you
    [center:li7exxi9]click for my thread[/center:li7exxi9]
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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    UP, Bert vs Wu 3 semi-done...
    I'm Brazilian, sorry for my bad english XD
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    Re: Josemetal's Thread

    man your anims are pretty good just have some stiffness here and there but those anims are really good keep up the good work courtesy?

    help my thread its slowly dieing
    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=73008


 
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