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    Rustbreaker ;3

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    Re: Flip and hammer

    Oh my god your pretty damn smooth with your animations and on the hammer animation there is a bit more power needed in my opinion. Pretty positive High Beg+ because the flip looks odd to me.

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    Re: *new* Backflip

    so... ya

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    Re: *new* Backflip

    Dude your amazing! Please make more, I simply adore your work. (:

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    Re: *new* Backflip

    I'd say intermediate, some very nice poses and a good grasp on physics and smooth movements.

    The 2nd stick on your latest after he boosts the guy into a flip could use a little more easing on the arms as they go down, maybe even end in a relaxed position, they are kind of just sitting slightly flexed at the elbow and stop a little abruptly. More easing could of been used as the back leg moves toward the front on the final pose, I also noticed slight shaking on the 2nd sticks back leg as the other stick is running toward him, but these are very minor errors

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    Re: *new* Backflip

    O fuck the backflip was gorgeous.

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    Re: *new* Backflip

    The animation was sexy however, the stickman on the right stopped, almost instantly.
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    Anyway, I don't spot many flaws with the stickman on the left. My only concern is his legs and back. I thought he would of bent his legs and arched his back more to look as though he is gaining more power. (If that even makes sence) Maybe, I'm just being picky.

    Keep it up mane!
    I'm looking foward to seeing more animations from you.

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    Re: *new* Backflip

    The backflip was very well animated, looked really nice. The only thing I can mention you could do better was the power of the "helping" stick. It looked like he didn't push at all. I think that could be fixed by making him straighten his arms so it looks like he's actually pushing the other stick in the air.
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    Re: *new* Backflip

    The backflip was pretty damn awesome and just like Cavolia said the other stick needed more power and you should animate him better to simply balance the animation.
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    Re: *new* Backflip

    Pretty good but the second guy stops too suddenly

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