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    Re: My animations :D

    I know, but I have school and Im usually busy but expect a long storied anim during the summer

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    Re: My animations :D

    You've got pretty nice animations and show a good sense of knowledge about the basics, but you really got to try something longer. All your animations are way too short for me to CC. Do something atleast 50 frames.
    That explosion test was pretty nice, and you did a good job with the colours fading to smoke. But the shape of it was a bit too iffy, make the ends of the smoke get sharper and don't add too many smoke-bits flying out.

    Keep it up and make something longer, you have the potential to get inters.

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    Re: My animations :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Lithium
    You've got pretty nice animations and show a good sense of knowledge about the basics, but you really got to try something longer. All your animations are way too short for me to CC. Do something atleast 50 frames.
    That explosion test was pretty nice, and you did a good job with the colours fading to smoke. But the shape of it was a bit too iffy, make the ends of the smoke get sharper and don't add too many smoke-bits flying out.

    Keep it up and make something longer, you have the potential to get inters.
    Yeah I know, same thing I said to Mr. Kilroy, I have school and I am just to busy. Expect one during the summer. I'll try making one this weekend

    And the explosion was made in 30 minutes and I got lazy at the end.
    Thanks for the advice though

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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt


    Inters Attempt

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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt

    The moves look good, but if you really want to get inter it have to be more than only moves.
    A cool background and a bit of a story is what brings you further.

    I dont know if you are going to finish it and make a story from it, but if you dont, this will not get your inter.
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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt

    Thanks for the advice,
    But I suck at storylined animations D:

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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt

    Cool animations. I don't see any real problems. You might (IMO) be over easing your movements, which make your animations look smooth, but boring and slow, no offense. You have great effects though, that Falcon kick animation is really cool. I'm sorry i don't have much to say, my advice would be to try to no over ease your animations. I say High Beginner, maybe Inter if you make a longer animation and work on the things people have pointed out.

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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt

    Your newest ones are faily good.
    I liked http://yourimg.in/i/9a8on5.gif that one quite a lot, the movements were smooth and had a nice pace to it. The main problem I found with it was that the physics looked floaty. Try to think of how someone in real life would react to those movements. For instance, at the beginning when he jumped from that little platform thing, it looks like he just jumped with no proper build up. If someone was about to jump like that, you could maybe make him bend his back for a build up, than make him push off hard. Also when his in mid air, he would have some sort of reaction to the push-off instead of just running casually in mid air, maybe you could of made him bend his arms up to his head. Also when he hit the ground, he would have some sort of reaction, such as him bending down a bit from the impact.
    The next bits seemed pretty off compared to the beginning of the animation, it looked a bit too random, powerless.
    Overall I really liked the beginning bit, but try to add some more realism to show better physics and power.
    High beginner for now, keep it up and improve your movements and physics more, than you could have a shot at inters.

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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt

    I Just noticed that in the 3d anim, he walks really unlikely.
    He swings his left arm forward same time with his left leg.
    normally you swing different sides forward at same time(if you understand my bad explenation)
    mabey try to fix that

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    Re: My animations :D(Inters Attempt

    Amazing show! good work! smoth and cool effects in my opinion inter! keep it up!


 
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